Persuasive Letter
Uni Lim
Dear, Mom and Dad
Hi, mom and dad it's me uni. I'm writing this letter to you because I believe that you will let me swim when we come back to Korea from Saudi Arabia. Many experts like my swimming teacher, for example had agreed with me. I'll explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.
The first reason is because it's good for my diet and health. There is a statics to show this is true. According to picture of me the 1st one, last year before my summer vacation and after the summer vacation which is also end of my diet program.
The second reason is because it makes me feel happy and comfortable when I swim. There are facts to show this is true. If you see the picture of me the 2nd one, with my swimming team after the lesson was done.
The final reason is because it makes you capacity higher. There is data to show this is true. One of the Korean famous swimmer Park Tae Hwan, he had a asthma and started swimming. And he is really healthy and a great swimmer of Korea.
As you can see you should let me swim according to my reason about my opinion
Sincerely,
Uni Lim
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You seem to have trouble posting photos; another issue is that your first and third arguments are pretty much the same, at least in the example you give.
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